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An Eco-System Of One's Own Analysis

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Undermining Motivational Effectiveness in Writing If a writer would like to learn how to negate the positive effect useful information could have on an audience, reading Alex Shoumatoff’s article “An Eco-System of One’s Own” could help learn how to make valid arguments fall on deaf ears. This article was written to draw attention to or inform individuals in modern society that nearly every decision that is made -- from the time a person gets up until the time a person goes to bed -- is destroying the environment. Shoumatoff does this by organizing his essay following the unfolding of an imagined typical day, beginning with the “morning juice,” he continues with conceivable uses of energy and resources that one consumes before one even eats breakfast, the drive to work, lunch decisions, the drive home, and ends with the relaxation that should take place after a day’s work (269-276). The organization of this essay is very effective at showing how much destruction an individual may be doing to the environment in a typical day. However, the negative presentation of the material and barrage of sarcasm undercuts the applicable suggestions made to help resolve these issues. …show more content…

Audiences (or people in general) do not enjoy being talked down to or preached at. This article appears to be a literary smack, or beating, depending on how much attention one already pays to environmental issues in daily life. Shoumatoff uses an artillery barrage of words that are locked, loaded, and ready to gun down opposing arguments before one can even be made. This type of attack is effective -- if you want to have an enemy retreat or get a war started. Shoumatoff may have wanted to start a war against persons ruining the environment but instead caused a retreat from the problem, and a counterattack that can be directed against his

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