Nayibe Lara
Instructor Pamela Archer
Business Communications
Page 133, 4.1 Audience Benefits and the “You” View (Obj. 3)
Your Task. Revise the following sentences to emphasize the perspective of the audience and the “you” view.
a. To avoid suffering the kinds of monetary losses we have experienced in the past, our credit union prohibits the cashing of third party checks presented by our members.
In order to protect you from suffering monetary losses, our credit union prohibits the cashing of third party checks presented by our members.
b. To help us process your order with our new database software, we need you to go to this Web site and fill out the required customer information.
To complete your order with our new
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According to our telephone conversation of April 1, we are sending to your Oakdale office in separate cover the printer toner and supplies.
b. Kindly inform the undersigned whether or not your representative will be making a visitation in the near future.
Please inform the undersigned whether or not your representative is visiting in the near future.
c. It is recommended that you conceptualize and submit your departmental budget ASAP.
It is recommended that you make and submit your departmental budget as soon as possible.
d. BTW, we’ve had some slippage in the schedule but don’t have to scrap everything and start from ground zero.
By the way, we have made some changes in the schedule but you don’t have to scrap everything and start from the beginning.
e. To facilitate ratification of this agreement, your negotiators urge that the membership respond in the affirmative.
In order to make the ratification of this agreement easier, your negotiators urge that the membership agree.
f. She didn’t have the guts to badmouth him 2 hz face.
She didn’t have the courage to correct him in front of everyone.
Page 134, 4.4 Bias-Free Language (Obj. 4)
Your Task. Revise the following sentences to reduce gender, racial, ethnic, age, and disability bias.
a. Any applicant for the position of fireman must submit a medical report signed by his physician.
Any applicant for
All group members enthusiastically partake in the leader’s arbitrations, and if conformity is impossible, a vote will be taken (Mc Caffery, 2004).
* a. Your email order cannot be processed; we request that you use the order form on our website instead.
An agreement means a consensus on at least those essential terms needed for a workable transaction. The process of reaching an agreement is generally analysed as involving an offer and acceptance. Where the offer is a clear indication of the terms upon which a person is prepared to be bound, and an acceptance is assenting to, agreeing, or
was a watch on the account and he would be unable to cash the check. Jeremy then
Petty cash fund is not to be used for personal items, IOU’s, office party favors, lunches, taxi fare, or cashing checks etc.
NOW, THEREFORE, in consideration of the mutual promises herein set forth and subject to the terms and conditions hereof, the parties agree as follows:
The ACO should enter a participation agreement and remain in good standing under the participation agreement.
Two other elements that are necessary for the successful conclusion of the contract are reality of consent and legal capacity of the parties to form a contract .
This agreement plainly relies on upon correspondence between the gatherings and composing, talked words, activities can be. The offer is a man who makes the offeror and offeree acknowledges the offer, the individual must be. It
Here at Union Bank of California, we pride ourselves in giving exceptional customer service. We appreciate your business, and we would like to assist you in any way that we can. This letter is in response to your claim #712, were your checking account statement had three questionable charges (reference number 7620011) at Wilson’s Gourmet.
In consideration of the mutual promises set forth herein, and other good and valuable consideration, the receipt and sufficiency of which are hereby acknowledged, and intending to be legally bound, the parties hereby agree as follows:
IN CONSIDERATION of the mutual promises exchanged by the parties as set forth herein, the parties intend to be legally bound and hereby agree as follows:
This type of endorsement restricts negotiability. The most common restrictive endorsement, “for deposit only,” followed by a signature, means the check may only be deposited into the account of the endorser, not cashed.
Representatives from the commission must also attend the meetings to join in with the discussion because they were the ones who wanted to introduce the law. Once an agreement has been reached, the agreed text is then sent to the council as well as the parliament for a final reading so that the law can finally be adopted.
This means that the payee, or the endorsee, cannot cash the cheque but must pay it into his or her own account with a financial institution. That institution, called the ‘collecting institution’, must then collect it from the drawee institution.