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Examples Of Attention Getter

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Attention-getter - I give the attention-getter a 7. The first sentence is “In today’s society, violence is unfortunately quite common.” If I was in the audience when this speech was given I would fall asleep because I am thinking I already know that so why should I care. The attention-getter could have been better if the speaker used a statistic to draw in the audience.
Introducion - I give the introduction a 9. The speaker could have used a better example instead of computers like cars.
Relevance - I give the credibility a 10. The speaker talks about how they have been exposed to guns since the age of 6. They continue to explain how they have used guns their whole life.
Previewed key ideas - I give the previewing of main ideas a 10. The …show more content…

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Signposts - I give the signposts a 9. The speaker does a good job telling the audience where they are going doing their speech.
Sources - The sources I give a 8. The speaker does not state the credibility of the sources. The speaker just states the name and what company he or she works for. If they would have stated the credibility of the sources it would help drive the home the point better because others would have the same view. For all I know one of the sources could be a doctor and he wrote an article on the second amendment.
Opposing views - I give the opposing views a 8. Due to the fact the speaker don’t explain in depth about what would happen if we did not support the second amendment. The speaker could have driven home the point better if they would have stated what would happen if we did not support the second amendment.
Conclusion - I give the conclusion a 9. The speaker did a good job of telling what he told the audience throughout the whole speech.
Language - I give the language of the speech a 7. The speech is very wordy and has unnecessary words in it. I believe if the speech was last wordy, the speaker could have driven home the point

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